I, The Editor, respond...
You try making heads or tails of these notes.
After reading it ten times, I think I finally got the drift. My goal in editing was to not drive away potential readers who might otherwise be subject to such madness at high rates of visual exchange. I also wanted to remove the repetition while keeping all the good parts. Maybe I made it worse by making it look like a real story attempt (with a certain madness, mais oui) as opposed to just notes. For that, I am to blame.
So hmmm, I don't know. Why don't you dear reader, please tell me whether the edited version works or the non-edited. This will affect my further work in such fields of constructive tampering.
Tony
Editor N Chief
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